Broken arrows pile where cupid fell long ago
I sit beneath the tree where time forgot me
To only read A story.
Beggars walk by with nothing to give but pennies.
And I have my cup out for change.
I saw redemption , she wasn’t on her knees
I felt love but it was in a cage.
I saw bravery through a coward
And a fight through broken battle lines.
I am broken
I am commanded
Gun warm
Bruised.
I walk but not alone
Scratched iris but yet not blind.
Looking for the beggar
To give more than his cup.
Interesting write, with powerful images and emotion. A strong poem. :)
ReplyDeleteI love the way you'ved used statements I saw/I felt/I saw/ Iam /I walk to make this very concrete and powerful whilst using subversive images to create a positive message.
ReplyDeletewow. this is vivid...love the gun warm...and your end is tight...you are right, you are not alone...
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeletewell penned.
Greetings,
ReplyDeleteWelcome join poets rally week 41,
Thanks for the time, a free verse is accepted,
Your poetry rocks. Hope to see you in
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Thank you!
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