Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Bedtime Story

She’s just a tornado with skinned knees
And a pink dress

She has some sort of ship
And a direct line to God
Lines static
She can tell a good story
But the commander is tired and the rain sometimes , it sometimes never stops falling.
She will tell you about the boys and how they are cowards with swords
And maybe just maybe she’ll tell you that the ocean is a grave yard full of their bones..


There’s a girl with those unusual lips and dark brown eyes, and they all say she is beautiful
But she won’t believe you , because those boys.. those boys..

She has a sailor she calls home,
She has grace to keep her calm,
And she fights, yes.

But if there was a lesson to be learned
It’s in the stories she writes

But we are soldiers hand made by Kings
Is there anyone listening… the line is static…   

8 comments:

  1. wonderful description of her...the opening lines say much and you explain it even further as you go...is anyone listening, of course...smiles.

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  2. Her imagination didn't fall out of the sky. She has a direct line to God and you. Beautifully written. She stood in full uniform before me. Lovely. Gay @beachanny

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  3. This is beautiful, manifesting a ton of talent..xxxJenne'

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  4. Dear Amy
    With your starting lines ...
    'She’s just a tornado with skinned knees
    And a pink dress'
    you got me hooked... and then the story unfolded like beautiful tapestry... and the ending brought me back to static... beautiful up and down.. thanks for sharing...


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.html

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  5. This has such a cool syncopated rhythm to it, and I'm totally in love with that girl. Very nice!

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  6. Love this one. Love the girl. I can see Tori Amos singing this...

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  7. great one...
    love the sentiments here.
    smiles.
    you rock.

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