There’s a guateen in my pocket
Holding up the storm
There’s gumption in my throat
Makes me say uh mmm….
I tremble in his presence footsteps loud and clear
Tell me Mr. Sandman,
never thought I would have the strength to leave you…
never thought I would have the strength to leave you…
With a bullet in my brain
Salvation in my brow
Freedom from this prison
You laugh-
I bow.
Puffy lipped girl, lesson learned time and again
New York tells me I’m special
But I needed to believe ...
But I read it from newsstands.
As I wipe those tears with smudged hands
So I turn to my boy ,
With another broken promise and a pen.
With another broken promise and a pen.
To tell him the devil won again.
I hand him a heart in a locket
Please tell him it’s not his fault
Please tell him I am sorry
So everything runs thin
The piano stops playing
What do you tell the boy who loses dreams….
Because of the monster under the bed.
Interesting piece.... broken promises do tend to wear down ones soul, eager for new beginnings.
ReplyDeleteInteresting visuals in the course of this one - strong flow, unique, engaging feel to it. Fast-paced, it really pulls you along, even as a sense of sadness builds...
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece.
I imagined a sad lullaby on the piano and felt the ending resolution profound after bleak cutting imagery through questioning decisions and/or remaining silent. So glad you linked this one. Cheers
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the flow, as it whips the reader this way and that. I liked the imagery as well as its unique style. Nice!
ReplyDeletesimply beautiful.
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