Monday, December 6, 2010

When The Honey Is Gone

There’s a guateen in my pocket
Holding up the storm
There’s gumption in my throat
Makes me say uh mmm….

I tremble in his presence footsteps loud and clear
Tell me Mr. Sandman,
 never thought I would have the strength to leave you…

With a bullet in my brain
Salvation in my brow
Freedom from this prison

You laugh-
I bow.

Puffy lipped girl, lesson learned time and again
New York tells me I’m special
But I needed to believe ...

But I read it from newsstands.

As I wipe those tears with smudged hands
So I turn to my boy ,
 With another broken promise and a pen.
To tell him the devil won again.

I hand him a heart in a locket
Please tell him it’s not his fault
Please tell him I am sorry

So everything runs thin
The piano stops playing
What do you tell the boy who loses dreams….

Because of the monster under the bed.

5 comments:

  1. Interesting piece.... broken promises do tend to wear down ones soul, eager for new beginnings.

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  2. Interesting visuals in the course of this one - strong flow, unique, engaging feel to it. Fast-paced, it really pulls you along, even as a sense of sadness builds...

    Wonderful piece.

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  3. I imagined a sad lullaby on the piano and felt the ending resolution profound after bleak cutting imagery through questioning decisions and/or remaining silent. So glad you linked this one. Cheers

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  4. Enjoyed the flow, as it whips the reader this way and that. I liked the imagery as well as its unique style. Nice!

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