tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post2030276873086840338..comments2023-03-24T03:42:13.621-07:00Comments on War Commander: For One Shot -ExcusedWarcommanderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09099325530039197057noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-78426380162556643302010-11-12T05:57:48.641-08:002010-11-12T05:57:48.641-08:00The darker side of the sensuality and your imagery...The darker side of the sensuality and your imagery made this one very strong.. your last line was perfect to the theme...<br />Your line made me think again about the effects of smile....<br />The way my smile creases your heart.<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-65607466302541346202010-11-10T17:19:26.802-08:002010-11-10T17:19:26.802-08:00Amy, everyone's used the word "intense&qu...Amy, everyone's used the word "intense" and I'm struggling to find a synonym that fits as well and I can't. Very dramatic poetry.<br />VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-23136018674566611242010-11-10T14:05:44.060-08:002010-11-10T14:05:44.060-08:00whew..that was certainly intense...i may not wash ...whew..that was certainly intense...i may not wash my hands for a while...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-191201438255081282010-11-10T13:49:24.525-08:002010-11-10T13:49:24.525-08:00Thank you I am so thankful for your commentsThank you I am so thankful for your commentsWarcommanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09099325530039197057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-69430586392281629532010-11-10T13:42:25.720-08:002010-11-10T13:42:25.720-08:00Nice One Shot, Amy - rich with imagery!Nice One Shot, Amy - rich with imagery!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-3490715113472627722010-11-10T13:30:16.340-08:002010-11-10T13:30:16.340-08:00Potent, intense, all that excellent jazz. This is...Potent, intense, all that excellent jazz. This is what poetry is supposed to be about, not Hallmark bulls**t romance verse.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-79314007111717546142010-11-10T12:31:21.040-08:002010-11-10T12:31:21.040-08:00Amy, you've some great lines in this piece; in...Amy, you've some great lines in this piece; intense, to reiterate Pete. Think it might be helpful to your audience to darken the font a bit, perhaps match the darker color I see on your sidebar. cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-50411623981277414782010-11-10T08:58:53.767-08:002010-11-10T08:58:53.767-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Warcommanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09099325530039197057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7633063732354266765.post-62723556293843439492010-11-09T01:43:42.771-08:002010-11-09T01:43:42.771-08:00this was dark and intense...well worth linking up ...this was dark and intense...well worth linking up with the One Shot meme at One Stop Poetry tonight..it deserves more exposure...cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.com